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Bryan Wiler's avatar

Excellent twist at the end!

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Tom Vandel's avatar

Glad you read it, Bryan - all the way!

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Thomas D’Arcy O’Donnell's avatar

OK.. am back - Not a Paid Subscriber re Chuck - so that dead ends - at his end - unless I use a workaround ‘ReStack with Comment.. sigh - As suggested prior - feelin uncomfortable ‘playing along here’ - so suggest this.. ‘Time Out’ from this Tom > to you Tom - get back to me later & glad to exchange notes !

On a real ‘bender currently - working a ‘crucial Story Outline - Environmental Action Drama

while revising prior Work - while addin New Content to my salamandry site - while Readin Copiously - while Shootin & Sharin docu style Imagery & Hybrid / HyperMedia ‘stuff

So many ways to skin th cat .. tell a story.. but Chuck can bring sum ‘tough love’ & best i sit this one out.. Will visit your Site ! Learn a bit about you ! Great ‘value in that in my perspective ! 🦎🏴‍☠️🎬

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Thomas D’Arcy O’Donnell's avatar

It’s pretty cool man .. & will say I’m a tough crowd .. & not sure I want to continue with Chuck’s thang.. which is what got me here .. but will go back & pickup the chase ! But in fairness - have read a ton of ‘forensics related’ Fact - Fiction.. burials .. (you have no idea how much !)

So I won’t quit on ya.. & will ‘hold fire’.. bounce back to Chuck now.. but promise to return.. 🦎🏴‍☠️🎬

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Jake Bradley's avatar

Wow! Really enjoyed that one. Nice work and what an ending.

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Dru Martin's avatar

Love reading your stories Tom. Looking forward to more. On Amazon this time!

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Mark Cannon's avatar

OK Tommy

Please send me what new you have.

It is a beautiful escape for me during the day

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Tom Vandel's avatar

Two small bits coming your way, Mr. MC.

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Mark Cannon's avatar

Oh Hell!

Hell of an end. That could be the next good movie on Prime!

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