Love and hate are opposite sides of the same coin and person. It's our nature.
Tom, my wife lives some of the parts you have in your lines :-)
Beautiful! She can certainly overstay her welcome at times. I loved "her white fur coat tossed next to the door."
The varying line lengths have a gentle storm-like quality.
Tom, how did you know parts of my wife ?
Excellent, well-done, brilliant, moving. Hoping not to offend or overstep, Tom, but the Ezra Pound in me would lose the first two lines -- without them the poem opens up a bit more. I'm a recovering editor, so you really should block me.
She can be a bitch 😉
It says it all, coolly eloquent
Tom, my wife lives some of the parts you have in your lines :-)
Beautiful! She can certainly overstay her welcome at times. I loved "her white fur coat tossed next to the door."
The varying line lengths have a gentle storm-like quality.
Tom, how did you know parts of my wife ?
Excellent, well-done, brilliant, moving. Hoping not to offend or overstep, Tom, but the Ezra Pound in me would lose the first two lines -- without them the poem opens up a bit more. I'm a recovering editor, so you really should block me.
She can be a bitch 😉
It says it all, coolly eloquent